Professional Development Session Presented at ASCD Conference on Teaching Excellence
Orlando, Florida - June 2019
Learning Objectives:
We had a great experience presenting this workshop at the Conference on Teaching Excellence this year. Our attendees participated enthusiastically, generated some wonderful poetry and reflection on teaching practice, and the feedback we received was extremely positive. Thanks to everyone who joined us. As promised in our sessions, here is what we did and what the participants created.
Learning Activity:
Upon entering the session, attendees were asked to choose a text from a collection of picture books, song lyrics, informational articles, poetry, pamphlets, book excerpts, and photos. Prior to the start of the session, we presorted these resources into five subtopics within the overarching topic of the Everglades. These subtopics included: alligators, tribal affairs, environmental issues, flora & fauna, and travel & tourism. We also gave each participant a small stack of sticky notes.
Independent: To complete the first step, participants read their text selection independently.
Collaboration: The next step is to have all participants disperse and find a chart paper placed around the room with their subtopic listed. Here they meet up with others who selected texts in the same subtopic.
This is where the magic happens! It is especially exciting to watch groups of people who have never met one another, to interact and collaborate towards a common goal, to write. There were elementary teachers and high school biology teachers, history teachers and ELA teachers from all grades.
If you are interested in Total Participation Techniques, this certainly qualifies. Everyone in the room had the opportunity to read, think, and reflect independently. Then these thoughts were brought together to share with the group. There is sharing, discussion, word-smithing, deliberating, and evidence of thinking and processing of ideas. We heard quite a bit of laughing too, which is always an added bonus. Having fun increases endorphins and lowers stress hormones!
Finally, the group is asked to make some final decisions and get their sticky notes drafted into a complete poem. In a found poem, you generally ask your writers not to add any of their own words.
When everyone has completed their poems on the chart paper, we recommend a gallery walk. In our case, time was limited and the groups were so energized and excited we had each group share their poems aloud. Here are some of them.
Alligator Blues
Alligators slither around in brackish
water, floating, turning, dipping,
full of emptiness
Rumbling sound buoyantly carpets
the swamp, eyeing the snake for lunch
today
Eats his guest, full to the brim, an
unutterable delight, powerfully
Suddenly, alligator holes keep the cycle
of life
Gracious gator peeks from the hold, protective
of young -- peaceful existence.
Jurassic Nights!
Everglades, wetlands, greenworld
Trying to find a little peace
of mind
solitude, mysterious
majestic palms
winged seeds that spiral in the air
The beauty of the River of grass
zooming down the highway
stretch your legs,
emerges from standing water,
sounds of frogs croaking &
alligators bellowing
Taking my own sweet time,
watch the sun go down.
Everglades, wetlands, greenworld
Alligator Nuggets
a huge grassy area
undeveloped
pinelands, hardwood hammocks and cypress
domes
reliance on the everglades
swampy, sunny terrain
wetlands
natural filter
swamp buggies
reliance on the everglades
plenty of time
boardwalk, rare wildlife, alligators
and anhingas
reliance on the everglades
The Warrior Cry
Their hard metal accents
Regal presence,
Well-organized warriors.
The white man came again
At the point of the bayonet
The sharp sawgrass cut
the skin.
The blood ran red.
Against blunt sentiments
I'm calling you like a long
lost friend.
To the harsh, unforgiving sounds
of slot machines.
Lack of artifacts, shallow, damaging
most people never saw
Indians. unique identity
experienced first hand
Chickees dispel the popular perception
vast prairies, rivers of grass
intricate sun-dabbled cypress swamp
Proliferate black & white photographs
with a soul, more valuable than gold
Zooming towards a measure of serenity
healing the leading protagonist
of the ecosystem
Of course we ended the session with a reflective discussion about how this strategy can build community in your classroom, and how you can use this strategy as we did or in another application in any kind of classroom. We heard several ideas, including professional development with teachers and unpacking a complex science text. Really, the possibilities are endless.
If you attended the conference and try this strategy in your learning environment, or if you have read here and given it a try, please let us know! Comment below, or email any one of us and share.
Thanks again to all of the wonderful teachers who joined us at ASCD-CTE 2019.
Write. Practice. Teach.
Annmarie, Helen, Laurie, and Natalie
The rest of the group poems:
Glades
All things large and small that makes
the earth beautiful
The plants and animals of the
Everglades are an unusual blend
Diverse, roots are tall, peaceful.
Where rivers flow, making all the
rules -- this river is like no other
river on earth
Reflection, habitat, mature, shadows
and silent skies.
The Everglades are a living
kaleidoscope of color and beauty.
***
Everglades
In the land of the Seminole
Watch the sun go down and let
the world go round
I'm taking my own sweet time
gettin' high, watchin' eagles fly
Alligators prowl
I'll drift around
Making gator sounds
Just trying to find
a little peace of mind
Days of old
Calling like a lost friend
***
Everglades National Park, Protected Area 1934
Hardwood hammocks are small islands
covered with trees.
green and strong
a meeting point
open heart
moon
Lake Okeechobee water supply
obstacles. Damage due to human activity
the next hurricane smash crack
wrench me, open-heart surgery
End of 1960's conservation
uphill toward money
Mangrove swamps grow where rivers flow into the ocean
sprawling concentration of tract homes, strip malls,
CVS and KFC. under water.
1972 Congress passed a bill limiting future
developments. Knock me down.
Cypress trees are right at home in cypress swamps.
I'll come back again.
the unanswered question...
***
Everglades
Famous, Serene, Sugar Sand
Melodic, Ecosystem
where a Great Egret is
among the flora.
Shadows hide tiny, sharp teeth
Strangles host, twists around
hunting and decaying throughout
Needs met through interdependence
and clouds bursting and sunlight
Produce double rainbows
What an experience!
***
swampy harmony
snoring rasp bug-eyed frog
silent sky flamingo flying
sawgrass stand endangered lowland
snake stew and gumbo limbo
strangler fig wild orchid blooming
systematic tranquility
***
The popular perception is that the
Everglades is a monotonous landscape, but
that it is not!
It's an ecosystem filled with wildlife,
vegetation, marsh land, and dangerous animals
like alligators, mosquitoes, and snakes.
Find a trail and explore; boating, cycling,
canoeing, and slogging!
While you're bird-watching the once hunted
animals, don't forget to see the grove of
mahogany trees.
Visit the smallest Post Office in the U.S.,
Native American tribes, and hear tales of
murder and Everglades mysteries from the
Park Rangers.
***
Sacred Earth. Tribes undisturbed, attacked, captured, enslaved.
This was unheard. The hues of slaughter on the horizon.
In defeat and despair, the once powerful had to retreat.
The fertile and secure everglades had its heart detroyed.
Determined and young with soulful eyes. Families proud.
Communities fell, and a home for the young, and old.
Generations of survivors filled with hatred and distrust
wondering what the future holds.
Windows to the past and eyes on the present.
***
Daughter of the Everglades
I heard the Ghost
easy muscled
graceful, assured people
bronze and dark in the glades
Communal edifices
Wealth untold
Generations of people still live
I know who you are...
***
The Alligator
Large, ferocious, motionless,
impressively cold and
cruel eyes, complicated
and full of peril, protective
moves with harmonic grace and wisdom
sometimes swift, and inspires fear
lives in swamp lands, brackish waters,
hidden within a continuous sheet of
water
Lend a rifle and go hunting,
the Keystone Species, the alligator.
***
Here's Allie
Towering royal palms
bed deadly cottonmouth
toothy grin seems benign
hunger look with his
scaly skin
cold-blooded
DANGER DANGER sounds
the water!
References from Slide Presentation:
- Use strategies and lessons to create a writing community in which all students have voice.
- Learn how building relationships helps create a culture of care in the writing classroom.
- Expand your definition of what it means to be a teacher of writing.
Learning Activity:
Upon entering the session, attendees were asked to choose a text from a collection of picture books, song lyrics, informational articles, poetry, pamphlets, book excerpts, and photos. Prior to the start of the session, we presorted these resources into five subtopics within the overarching topic of the Everglades. These subtopics included: alligators, tribal affairs, environmental issues, flora & fauna, and travel & tourism. We also gave each participant a small stack of sticky notes.
Independent: To complete the first step, participants read their text selection independently.
Collaboration: The next step is to have all participants disperse and find a chart paper placed around the room with their subtopic listed. Here they meet up with others who selected texts in the same subtopic.
If you are interested in Total Participation Techniques, this certainly qualifies. Everyone in the room had the opportunity to read, think, and reflect independently. Then these thoughts were brought together to share with the group. There is sharing, discussion, word-smithing, deliberating, and evidence of thinking and processing of ideas. We heard quite a bit of laughing too, which is always an added bonus. Having fun increases endorphins and lowers stress hormones!
Finally, the group is asked to make some final decisions and get their sticky notes drafted into a complete poem. In a found poem, you generally ask your writers not to add any of their own words.
When everyone has completed their poems on the chart paper, we recommend a gallery walk. In our case, time was limited and the groups were so energized and excited we had each group share their poems aloud. Here are some of them.
Alligator Blues
Alligators slither around in brackish
water, floating, turning, dipping,
full of emptiness
Rumbling sound buoyantly carpets
the swamp, eyeing the snake for lunch
today
Eats his guest, full to the brim, an
unutterable delight, powerfully
Suddenly, alligator holes keep the cycle
of life
Gracious gator peeks from the hold, protective
of young -- peaceful existence.
Jurassic Nights!
Everglades, wetlands, greenworld
Trying to find a little peace
of mind
solitude, mysterious
majestic palms
winged seeds that spiral in the air
The beauty of the River of grass
zooming down the highway
stretch your legs,
emerges from standing water,
sounds of frogs croaking &
alligators bellowing
Taking my own sweet time,
watch the sun go down.
Everglades, wetlands, greenworld
Alligator Nuggets
a huge grassy area
undeveloped
pinelands, hardwood hammocks and cypress
domes
reliance on the everglades
swampy, sunny terrain
wetlands
natural filter
swamp buggies
reliance on the everglades
plenty of time
boardwalk, rare wildlife, alligators
and anhingas
reliance on the everglades
The Warrior Cry
Their hard metal accents
Regal presence,
Well-organized warriors.
The white man came again
At the point of the bayonet
The sharp sawgrass cut
the skin.
The blood ran red.
Against blunt sentiments
I'm calling you like a long
lost friend.
To the harsh, unforgiving sounds
of slot machines.
Lack of artifacts, shallow, damaging
most people never saw
Indians. unique identity
experienced first hand
Chickees dispel the popular perception
vast prairies, rivers of grass
intricate sun-dabbled cypress swamp
Proliferate black & white photographs
with a soul, more valuable than gold
Zooming towards a measure of serenity
healing the leading protagonist
of the ecosystem
Of course we ended the session with a reflective discussion about how this strategy can build community in your classroom, and how you can use this strategy as we did or in another application in any kind of classroom. We heard several ideas, including professional development with teachers and unpacking a complex science text. Really, the possibilities are endless.
If you attended the conference and try this strategy in your learning environment, or if you have read here and given it a try, please let us know! Comment below, or email any one of us and share.
Thanks again to all of the wonderful teachers who joined us at ASCD-CTE 2019.
Write. Practice. Teach.
Annmarie, Helen, Laurie, and Natalie
The rest of the group poems:
Glades
All things large and small that makes
the earth beautiful
The plants and animals of the
Everglades are an unusual blend
Diverse, roots are tall, peaceful.
Where rivers flow, making all the
rules -- this river is like no other
river on earth
Reflection, habitat, mature, shadows
and silent skies.
The Everglades are a living
kaleidoscope of color and beauty.
***
Everglades
In the land of the Seminole
Watch the sun go down and let
the world go round
I'm taking my own sweet time
gettin' high, watchin' eagles fly
Alligators prowl
I'll drift around
Making gator sounds
Just trying to find
a little peace of mind
Days of old
Calling like a lost friend
***
Everglades National Park, Protected Area 1934
Hardwood hammocks are small islands
covered with trees.
green and strong
a meeting point
open heart
moon
Lake Okeechobee water supply
obstacles. Damage due to human activity
the next hurricane smash crack
wrench me, open-heart surgery
End of 1960's conservation
uphill toward money
Mangrove swamps grow where rivers flow into the ocean
sprawling concentration of tract homes, strip malls,
CVS and KFC. under water.
1972 Congress passed a bill limiting future
developments. Knock me down.
Cypress trees are right at home in cypress swamps.
I'll come back again.
the unanswered question...
***
Everglades
Famous, Serene, Sugar Sand
Melodic, Ecosystem
where a Great Egret is
among the flora.
Shadows hide tiny, sharp teeth
Strangles host, twists around
hunting and decaying throughout
Needs met through interdependence
and clouds bursting and sunlight
Produce double rainbows
What an experience!
***
swampy harmony
snoring rasp bug-eyed frog
silent sky flamingo flying
sawgrass stand endangered lowland
snake stew and gumbo limbo
strangler fig wild orchid blooming
systematic tranquility
***
The popular perception is that the
Everglades is a monotonous landscape, but
that it is not!
It's an ecosystem filled with wildlife,
vegetation, marsh land, and dangerous animals
like alligators, mosquitoes, and snakes.
Find a trail and explore; boating, cycling,
canoeing, and slogging!
While you're bird-watching the once hunted
animals, don't forget to see the grove of
mahogany trees.
Visit the smallest Post Office in the U.S.,
Native American tribes, and hear tales of
murder and Everglades mysteries from the
Park Rangers.
***
Sacred Earth. Tribes undisturbed, attacked, captured, enslaved.
This was unheard. The hues of slaughter on the horizon.
In defeat and despair, the once powerful had to retreat.
The fertile and secure everglades had its heart detroyed.
Determined and young with soulful eyes. Families proud.
Communities fell, and a home for the young, and old.
Generations of survivors filled with hatred and distrust
wondering what the future holds.
Windows to the past and eyes on the present.
***
Daughter of the Everglades
I heard the Ghost
easy muscled
graceful, assured people
bronze and dark in the glades
Communal edifices
Wealth untold
Generations of people still live
I know who you are...
***
The Alligator
Large, ferocious, motionless,
impressively cold and
cruel eyes, complicated
and full of peril, protective
moves with harmonic grace and wisdom
sometimes swift, and inspires fear
lives in swamp lands, brackish waters,
hidden within a continuous sheet of
water
Lend a rifle and go hunting,
the Keystone Species, the alligator.
***
Here's Allie
Towering royal palms
bed deadly cottonmouth
toothy grin seems benign
hunger look with his
scaly skin
cold-blooded
DANGER DANGER sounds
the water!
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McDonough, J & Ackerman, K. (2017) Relationship-building for effective writing instruction. International Literacy
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Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage Publications, p2532-4.
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